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I remember when laughing wasn't forced, and playing games was something children lived for.
I remember when the words "I love you" sat on my lips like a feather, waiting for the slightest gust of wind.
I remember running through the grass barefoot, chasing fireflies late into the night.


She sat one edge of the bed, feet barely touching the cold hardwood floor. The only warmth in the entire house came from the corner of the room, on the ground where she lay sobbing only minutes before. Next to one of her feet was a shattered vile of red nail polish. It's contents were angrily spattered on the white wall in front of her.

Sanity was evicted last Thursday.
It forgot to pay the rent.

He sat on the other edge of the bed with his back to her, head slumped in defeat. Fragments of their most recent episode flooded his thoughts. Tears he refused to let fall welled in the corner of his eyes. A love he refused to let die welled in the corner of his heart.

She ran her fingers through her hair, grasping it at the roots in frustration. Eyes clamped shut, she tried to block out the train wreck of broken memories clouding her mind. Same as before, she looked for a flicker of light. This time there was none. Tears filled with hope flowed from her eyes, until there was none left.

He picked up the frame and turned it over. Broken glass fell to the floor into the same tiny fragments their relationship had become. Looking at the photograph, he saw love smiling back at him. Hope in the form of memories recorded on glossy paper. Same as before, he looked for a flicker of light.
Keeping his eyes on the picture, a smile on his face, he reached behind him. His hand blindly searched for her. A vast difference from the many times her hands so easily found him. He turned around and found nothing but a bleeding white wall.


Walking silently from the house, she left behind the torn remnants of her relationship, scrawled on a piece of paper.


You strive. You cry. You hurt. You lie. You forgive. You try. And in the end.. it works.
©2003-2009 ~unpopular
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*nods* very good.
Good story, and I like the image going along with it! Very skillfully written. :)
Some really powerful memories in these words that I can detect.
I Love your new photograph and your words that go with it!
Your Shot has detail and alot of emotion and the clearness is just Beautiful as well as very dramatic!!!!!
Great Art and a Fav as well...........
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I jsut posted new material and I hope you can comment on it if you get a chance, Thanks for your time and your Art Works...........

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the portrait is very good.. the history.. i will read it later, it seems interesting:)

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I really liked how you had the two characters not interacting, but you still got the nature of their relationship (and the degeneration thereof) across really clearly. It got that terrible in-the-same-room but not together feeling. Good stuff.
Absolutly beautiful

The is a perfect example of reflective prose at it's finest

You also have a reflective posture
You of course have done it again
Another inspired addition

Very nice ( and I mean it)
love the description, but you should not make a deviation bigger than x1000 wide...

I cannot truly appriciate the image when i have to scroll all over to see it... :(

it looks beautiful though!!!

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What a powerful little piece.
You are very very skillfull at this art.
It hurt to read it,
but I felt every bit.


:+favlove:

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A wonderful piece. The story is heartbreaking and very emotional and the picture is just fantastic. I'm truly in love with it.
Its very very sensuous, sad, beutiful and soft.
:heart:

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